Inspired by “Microfiction Monday –
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.”
“So,” Larry took a long drag on his Camel, “It’s you.”
The gun went off.
“It didn’t have to be this way,” Joe said vanishing into the fog.
~140 Characters~
Inspired by “Microfiction Monday –
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.”
“So,” Larry took a long drag on his Camel, “It’s you.”
The gun went off.
“It didn’t have to be this way,” Joe said vanishing into the fog.
~140 Characters~
Very well done, like a scene from a film, clever!
So did Joe disappear into the fog and into the water, or just disappear into the morning, the gun still smoking in his hand. Who killed whom? I really need to know…really!
Great microfiction…loved it.
Have a wonderful week. Cheers~
Poor guy. Didn’t see that one coming, huh??? :O)
Aw, poor guy. Who did the killing? So much to stir my curiosity. Great one!
♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥
It is , just like a movie script.
I want to hear more!
But it was-LOL! Very nice!
Hi faith, nice µ-fiction story you have today. 🙂
It just goes to show you should never trust a
person who is dragging his camel around.
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