Into the Fog

Inspired by “Microfiction Monday
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.”


“So,” Larry took a long drag on his Camel, “It’s you.”
The gun went off.
“It didn’t have to be this way,” Joe said vanishing into the fog.

~140 Characters~

7 responses to “Into the Fog

  1. Very well done, like a scene from a film, clever!

  2. So did Joe disappear into the fog and into the water, or just disappear into the morning, the gun still smoking in his hand. Who killed whom? I really need to know…really!
    Great microfiction…loved it.
    Have a wonderful week. Cheers~

  3. Poor guy. Didn’t see that one coming, huh??? :O)

  4. Aw, poor guy. Who did the killing? :/ So much to stir my curiosity. Great one!

    ♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

  5. It is , just like a movie script.
    I want to hear more!

  6. But it was-LOL! Very nice!

  7. Hi faith, nice µ-fiction story you have today. 🙂

    It just goes to show you should never trust a
    person who is dragging his camel around.

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