The Rival

Inspired by “Microfiction Monday
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.”


“Let’s see how impressed Maria is now with Jose’s big modeling career,” Jose’s rival snickered as he defaced the poster with a final “R”.

~139 Characters~

9 responses to “The Rival

  1. Fun one for the day! Got to watch out for those rivals!!! Hope your holiday season was all you wanted it to be! Enjoy!


  2. Ha! Good one. I think Jose will have the last laugh, though!

  3. Man, if your microfiction was a book, I’d be dropping everything to read it! Great take, Faith, great take!

  4. There is always somebody that’s jealous of your success!
    Great idea!
    Happy New Year Faith!

  5. So he changed it to greaser? Ouch! But, employment is employment, right?

  6. Beware the rival! LOL


    Maria is a lucky lady to find a hard worker like Jose.
    She will see throught all the sabatage going on! 🙂

  8. Ooooh, trouble in the male modeling world I see.

  9. LOL … VERY GOOD!!

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