Inspired by “Microfiction Monday
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.”
Pancho’s mind was on Feleena.
He saw her ayer at Rose’s Cantina.
As he imagined her dancing there
The rattler caught him unaware
Note: “Ayer” is Spanish it translates to “yesterday”. It was shorter in Spanish. I cheated. 🙂
This story of Feleena is based on Marty Robbins’ El Paso trilogy which included El Paso, Feleena, and El Paso City.