First Fire

ah
the
first fire
of the season
warms our home tonight
~

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15 responses to “First Fire

  1. to me, this poem could actually have more than one meaning if given space… Very straight to the point, but missing a little room for the movement of mind. other than that, I like the simplicity.

  2. love the fires that make the home warm and welcome

    thanks for sharing with One Shot

    moon smiles

  3. cool short poem.

  4. A nice simple image. Thanks for sharing.

  5. Ah, the first fire of the season is always sweet – like the poem’s shape. 🙂

  6. perfect! love the creativeness that went into this. your words speak of a cozy fire while the structure is shaped like a tree. reminds me of xmas. don’t need to say much more than that.

    thank you

  7. We had our first two nights ago – loved the fire — but the draft pulls the heat from upstairs. Ah, well.

  8. Nice image – cozy and warm.

  9. that
    feels good
    and stirs great
    memories….ahh…

  10. Nicely arranged… you could have even colored the font to look like a fire.

  11. less is more…a heart warming tale…cheers pete

  12. Beautiful image…. Warm and cozy…

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

  13. heart-warming short poem! feels good!

  14. Much warmth in a few words. And I like that it’s shaped a bit like fire.

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